*waves pom-poms at SHINEYDISTRACTION* Shhh, go play somewhere else for a few weeks! (Awww, sorry! Maybe---any of them to do with HN et co? :D ;) ) But I'm glad finishing looks promising right now. :) Hurrah for the outline and good pacing! (Aww, good! :D Oooh, so it's the internal dialogue that's got you stumped? That is tricky. Hmmm...) (I hope it helps! :) )